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The Spot Writers – “The Message”

Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to write something write about a picture frame from a thrift store with a message scrawled on the back.

This time, it’s Cathy MacKenzie’s turn. Her writings have been published in almost 400 print and online publications. Check out her website (www.writingwicket.wordpress.com) for further information on her works.

Cathy is continuing with more tales about the Grimes family.

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“The Message”

“Mom!” Jimmy yelled. “I thought all the Christmas decorations were put away.”

Elise’s voice echoed from the top of the stairs. “They are. What are you talking about?”

“You’ve got a Christmas picture on the table, and it’s February.” And it’s of that damn Sprite, Jimmy thought.

His mother appeared at the bottom of the stairs. “What picture?”

Jimmy pointed to the dining room table. “That one.”

“Oh, that. Picked it up at the thrift store yesterday. Two ninety-nine. They’re trying to clear out Christmas stuff, I guess.”

“We don’t need it. We have enough pictures of that guy.”

“Jimmy, such language!”

“I said ‘that guy.’ I didn’t swear.”

His mother waved him off. “Even if I didn’t want Sprite’s picture—which I do—the frame’s worth at least nine ninety-nine.”

“We have enough frames. Boxes of them in the basement. Dad’s gonna be pissed when he sees another one.”

Elise laughed. “Then it’ll be our little secret.” She gave him a sly smile before heading back upstairs.

“Jeepers,” he muttered. “Why…”

He went to the dining room. Hated touching the thing but picked it up anyway. Sprite stared at him with that expression. That knowing look. Like he could see everything Jimmy had ever done. Sprite’s mouth was weird, though. His lips were pressed tightly together as if physically holding words back. Jimmy was glad the thing was behind glass.

All the sprites looked that way. Every. Single. One.

What was it with these things?

He turned the frame over. The backing was loose. “Cheap,” he mumbled. “Not worth nine dollars. Not even two.”

He picked at the tape holding the backing to the frame. His fingers kept going—peeling, peeling, peeling.

The cardboard fell off.

A small envelope dropped onto the table.

Jimmy picked it up. Glanced around. Made sure his mother hadn’t come back down.

He felt something inside. Tore open the side.

A small card. Heavy stock. About two inches by three. Green.

He flipped it over.

I still watch what you do!

Jimmy dropped the card. Looked back at the frame on the table.

Sprite’s expression had changed. Still that “knowing” look, but now he smiled.

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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The Spot Writers – “Perfect” by Val Muller

Welcome to the Spot Writers! This month’s prompt is “He (she/they) started the new year with…” Today’s prompt comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit mystery series Corgi Capers.

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“Perfect” by Val Muller

She started the new year with a pen in hand. Perfection was the enemy of progress. She’d read so many variations of that quote lately, it was like the universe was talking directly to her.

The blank page in her new sketchbook stared back at her. Yes, a sketchbook instead of a journal. There would be no lines, no rules. Just progress.

She wrote a sentence, a line that struck her. It had been with her for a few months now, coming and going, and with it a vague idea for a new story. For now, it was just a line. She’d read that a single line is how J. R. R. Tolkien started his masterpiece The Hobbit. Just a line.

And look where that led him.

She didn’t know what to write next, so she copied the line over again, in cursive this time. Then again in a bubbly font. The letters looked perfect.

No.

How did Tolkien go from a single line to an epic adventure? Certainly not by copying a sentence. An illustration, perhaps.

The line had to do with flight. What could she draw? Something about freedom. A cloud. Pathetic. What else? How do you draw blue sky? How to draw freedom?

All the familiar fears came. The internal and eternal editor, her own worst critic. How could she silence it?

This is how the past year had gone—the start of something, then that something killed by an internal editor. This could not go on. She was going to draw a bird. It was decided. It was going to be the worst bird she ever drew, but it would help her. A bird was like freedom, right? She just didn’t know where to start. The body? The wing? She almost reached for her phone, for a tutorial to show her how to do it the right way.

But no.

This year was about imperfection.

Just draw.

She took a deep breath. Closed her eyes. Drew the arc of the wing. Felt its body curve as she drew blindly on the page. She thought about the story arc, the character’s drive to be free. The story flowed into her subconscious as she tried to feel her way back from the body to the second wing.

She opened her eyes.

It was the worst drawing of a bird she had ever seen.

And it was perfect.

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/ 

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/ 

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com 

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/ 

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The Spot Writers – “The Last House on Lantern Road” by Chiara De Giorgi

Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to write a story about the darkness at this time of year. 

This week’s contribution comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara is an Italian author and currently lives in Berlin, Germany. She writes fiction, with a focus on children’s literature and science fiction.

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“The Last House on Lantern Road” by Chiara De Giorgi

“Who was supposed to take care of booking the room?”

Jeremy cast a stern look at Benjamin, Elijah, and Dorothy, his three younger siblings.

They had driven all afternoon to reach Hearthwick in time for the Winter Solstice Festival. And now that they were finally there, in a village that looked straight out of a fairy tale, blanketed in snow and at least one hour’s drive from the nearest town, it turned out the inn had no reservation under their name. Worse still, there wasn’t a single room left.

The three of them exchanged a lost, embarrassed look.

“Oops,” Dorothy finally whispered.

Jeremy threw his arms up in the air but didn’t comment. He got back into the car and started the engine.

“Where are we going?” Elijah asked from the passenger seat, already pulling up the satnav on his phone.

“The girl at the front desk said there’s an empty house in Lantern Road. It’s at the top of the hill, just before you leave Hearthwick, right at the edge of the woods. She said it used to belong to the founder of the festival, Mr. Bowler.”

“You want us to sleep in an abandoned house?” Benjamin asked incredulously.

“We’ve been talking about coming to this festival for years, and we finally managed to coordinate our schedules,” Jeremy said. “When’s the next chance going to come around?”

His siblings didn’t answer, so he added, “Let’s at least go see what this house is like.”

The last weak rays of sunlight filtered through the branches of the nearby woods when they reached the abandoned house. All things considered, it was in good shape. Once inside, they even found logs stacked neatly beside the fireplace in the ground-floor living room.

They explored the upper floor and found bedrooms furnished with old four-poster beds and decorated wardrobes, writing desks, chairs, and small armchairs.

“It’s old-fashioned, sure, but nothing looks broken or beyond saving,” Elijah said, surprised.

“I’d still rather sleep in the living room in front of the fireplace,” Dorothy said. “The mattresses on those beds might be full of bugs.”

“If no one’s slept in them for decades, the bugs are long dead,” Benjamin pointed out.

“Mmm, okay… Still, if the four of us sleep in the same room with the fire lit, it’s better anyway.”

When they returned to the living room, a surprise was waiting for them: a cheerful fire was crackling in the fireplace.

“Hey! Who lit the fire?”

“Is there someone here?”

“Come on, guys, nice prank. The fire was exactly what we needed.”

“Yeah. It’s so warm over here…”

“I’m going to get something to eat,” Jeremy announced, while the others tried to figure out how the fire could possibly have lit itself. Benjamin went with him, while Dorothy and Elijah stayed behind to prepare four makeshift beds so they could all spend the night together in the living room.

When Benjamin and Jeremy came back with the food, they found the other two whispering with worried expressions on their faces.

“We got bread, cheese, cold cuts, and some fruit,” Benjamin announced as he walked in. When no one answered, he added in mock exasperation, “Okay, okay, you caught me. I also got chocolates!”

Jeremy noticed their siblings expressions and asked: “Is something wrong?”

“Well, it’s just that…” Elijah replied.

“Since you left, some strange things have been happening in this house,” added Dorothy.

“Like what?”

“Nothing serious, really, but…”

“But what?”

“Just… strange things.”

“Inexplicable,” Elijah added.

“For heaven’s sake, be clear! What is it? A gas leak? Rats in the walls? What?”

“Well, the fire, for instance. None of us could have lit it. We were all upstairs together.”

“Yeah. And then some candles lit themselves too.”

“Dangerously close to the curtains, by the way.”

“And the doors keep opening and closing on their own.”

“And we can hear footsteps going up and down the stairs.”

“I’m pretty sure the chandelier started swinging too.”

“And also—”

“Ooh, awesome, we ended up in a haunted house?” Benjamin asked enthusiastically, jumping onto the sofa and kicking up a cloud of dust.

“Stop. Just—stop,” Jeremy ordered.

“Achoo!” sneezed the sofa.

All four fell silent, three of them staring at Benjamin with wide eyes.

“You just sat on a ghost,” Dorothy said in a strangled voice.

“Oops,” Benjamin said, carefully getting up from the sofa.

“What do we do?” Elijah whispered. “Do you think we should leave?”

“I don’t think it makes much difference if you whisper,” Dorothy pointed out.

“We can’t go back out on the road now,” Jeremy said. “It’s dark, we’re in the mountains, we don’t know these roads, and they’re covered in snow and ice. On top of that, we’re exhausted after spending all afternoon driving. It’s too dangerous.”

“And staying in a house with a ghost isn’t?” Elijah whispered again, still darting nervous glances all around.

“Footsteps on the stairs, doors opening and closing… it doesn’t seem evil,” Dorothy said. “And it even lit the fire for us!”

At that moment, one of the windows flew open and a gust of wind swept a flurry of snow into the room. A laugh drifted through the air—sharp and clear, but slightly distorted. Just enough to send a shiver down their spines.

Needless to say, none of them managed to get any sleep that night. Around them, small strange things kept happening. Nothing dramatic: shadow puppets flickering on the wall opposite the fireplace, notes of piano and violin drifting down from the upper floor, floorboards creaking… On top of that, a snowstorm broke out during the night, so every now and then they had to walk around the house to shut the windows. And when they returned to the living room, they would inevitably find the beds in disarray.

Toward morning, the storm finally died down. Pale sunbeams filtered through the window, and the first light of dawn fell on a small leather-bound book lying on the floor.

“Hey, what’s that?”

Benjamin picked it up and leafed through it.

“It looks like a diary to me, look: it’s all handwritten.”

“Is there the owner’s name? Check the first page!”

“It says… Robert Bowler!”

“That’s the owner of this house.”

“A.k.a. the founder of the Solstice Festival.”

“Could be interesting! Let’s read a few pages!”

This is unbelievable! My fellow citizens held a procession this afternoon. All dressed in dark clothes, they walked through Hearthwick in silence, looking glum. I followed them out of curiosity, because I was not aware of any celebrations or festivities at this time of year: it is the middle of spring and Easter is already past, and in any case, people do not dress in black at Easter… Anyway. In the end, I realised they were playing a prank on me… They staged my funeral, no less. Ha ha ha, how funny! Yet I’m still here. But I’m not offended. Don’t say Robert Bowler can’t take a joke! They’re such a bunch of jokers!

There’s something strange in the air. I feel like I’m missing moments lately. Even whole days, as if I were sleeping for days without ever waking up. And when I finally wake up, the things I remember have changed. I’m confused. I’ve tried to talk to my friends about it, but sometimes I can’t remember their names and they’re distracted and don’t hear me. So I get distracted too and poof! I forget what I was doing. Then I go back to sleep. I think I might have the flu. They said this year’s flu would be bad and unusually severe…

I’m starting to feel bored. The situation hasn’t changed, everything is still very strange. I think the flu must have left some after-effects in my brain. I’ll go to the doctor at the first opportunity. If I think hard, I’m sure I can remember his name… Crickstone, no wait… Frickstone… something like that. It’ll come to me. However, I’ve found a new pastime to fill my days: I open and close all the doors in the house one after the other. Sometimes it doesn’t take much to have fun, and after all, everyone knows I’m a jolly fellow! Ha ha ha! Laughing makes me feel so good, so… alive!

The siblings read some passages from the diary and slowly came to a conclusion.

“He’s…”

“Passed,” whispered Elijah.

“But he doesn’t know it yet,” whispered Dorothy in reply.

“Poor thing. He seems to miss life.”

“That’s what he’s been trying to do since we’ve been here: interact with us.”

“Guys… I have an idea…”

The four siblings spent the day wandering through the streets of Hearthwick, where stalls overflowed with food, hot drinks, and handcrafted souvenirs. At sunset, street musicians and performers began taking turns, giving small shows of music and theater around large bonfires. The winter solstice night was beginning: the festival’s climax.

They returned to the abandoned house loaded with good food, drinks, and decorations. Soon the living room by the fireplace had been transformed into a party hall, and they danced, sang, laughed, and toasted together.

It didn’t take long before the ghost that had kept them awake the previous night appeared. They invited him into their dancing, offered him a glass of wine, and little by little, the shadow gained color and substance, until it took on the appearance of Mr. Bowler, still slightly translucent. He was a truly friendly, jovial sort, though a little confused about his place in the world.

Unsure how to act or what to reveal, the four siblings never told him that he had passed. Instead, they gave him a night full of fun and life.

And when the sun rose on Yule morning, Mr. Bowler turned to the window and let the sunlight wash over him. A moment later, he smiled at the four siblings and waved.

“Thank you. I understand where I must go now. Goodbye.”

At the first light of day, he disappeared.

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

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The Spot Writers – “Mrs. Wilson’s Classroom” by Val Muller

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is “nick of time.” Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit mystery series Corgi Capers.

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“Mrs. Wilson’s Classroom” by Val Muller

Joanne balanced on the yoga ball, feet on the floor, gently rolling back and forth, coffee cup cradled in her hands. No one was talking to her, no one was asking her questions, no one was touching her.

It was a Wednesday morning, and her coworkers would be in the throes of their week, struggling to get by, and probably someone had left all sorts of leftover baked goods in the workroom in a misguided attempt at morale boosting that would only serve to undermine everyone’s healthy intentions.

And the students would be an all-time challenge, this being the second full week of school. The novelty had worn off and everyone was back to the grind. Behavior issues started to rise on Wednesdays.

Joanne thought about going to the bank. What a treat that would be, running an errand when most people were at work. But of course she couldn’t. Not with Sylvia having the car. Or, not Sylvia. Joanne. Today she was Joanne.

Joanne–the real Joanne–stood up from the yoga ball and set down her coffee. She wasn’t used to drinking it that warm. At

school, it was always stone-cold by the time she got to it. Besides, she hadn’t sent in her electronic doppelganger to buy time for coffee. Today, she had three small home improvement projects to finish and a book to read.

She sat on the floor and took a knife to the fan box. The bedroom ceiling fan was at least a decade old. This one had been on clearance and would be a nice refresh. She lined all the pieces up and allowed her mind to wander as she cataloged the blades, the screws, the motor assembly. It was 9:52. The students would be doing silent reading now. Johnny would probably have his phone cradled in his book, and Samantha would be doing makeup in the corner.

Joanne did not envy Sylvia.

She took three steps up the ladder and was just starting to take down the old fan when her watch beeped. It was Sylvia. Low battery. How could that be? She had just been charged. Maybe it was the school wifi. It was probably the school wifi. The whole building used to be a bomb shelter or something like that. The wifi came and went and drained phone batteries quickly. She didn’t realize it would drain androids also.

She hurried to the closet for Sylvia’s spare battery. But how to get it to her?

Two competing emotions took over. Panic, of course. She could lose her job if anyone found out it was Sylvia teaching

the class. Could? Would. Maybe jail time. But there was anger, too. She’d gone to such lengths for a day off, and now what? She had to hire an Uber to get her to school so she could use her spare key to sneak a spare battery into her car so Sylvia could come get it to make it through the day?

She ordered the Uber and looked at the time. Sylvia had a half hour before lunch. Would the Uber get here in time? Joanne pulled up Sylvia’s app. Adroidlyfe. She programmed Sylvia to go to the car at lunch, to change its battery.

Thr Uber driver took one look at the battery and batted an eye. “That for a ‘droid?” the driver asked.

Joanne nodded.

“What for?”

“I need to avert a mental breakdown, so I programmed my lookalike Droid to watch my students in school while I take a mental health day, only the battery drained faster than expected. So I need you to help get me across the county in the next 20 minutes so my Droid can swap the battery while the kids are at lunch, thereby minimizing the chance that my ruse will be discovered.”

The driver waited one beat before breaking into laughter. “Okay. Okay. I shouldn’t have asked,” he said.

“No, but seriously, get me there in 15 and I wil double your

tip.”

“Lady,” he said. “Buckle up.”

After arriving in the nick of time, Joanne tipped her driver well and asked him to stop at the bank before returning her home for the rest of her mental health day.

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The Spot Writers–Our Members:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com Chiara De Giorgi: https://ch

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The Spot Writers – “Elsa Mon in: The Strange Case of the Missing Cucumbers” by Chiara De Giorgi

Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to write a story that involves a tomato, a cloaked individual, and a missing shoe.

This week’s contribution comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara is an Italian author and currently lives in Berlin, Germany. She writes fiction, with a focus on children’s literature and science fiction.

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“Elsa Mon in: The Strange Case of the Missing Cucumbers” by Chiara De Giorgi

On a bright late-spring morning, Elsa Mon, the beloved paranormal romance author, sat before her laptop, a mug of orange-and-cinnamon latte and a raisin bun within easy reach.

A perfect setup for a productive day of writing, she thought approvingly.

She had just begun working on her new book, titled Bernie and Barney in the Barn, and she could hardly wait to write the scene where Barney—the scarecrow to whom the naïve and blonde farm girl Bernie had affectionately given a name—came to life and appeared as a jacked Adonis.

Ever since meeting the Stranger, Elsa had wanted to include a character in one of her novels who could change shape and appearance. The Stranger was a special, one-of-a-kind creature: able to assume the form of any living being—or non-living thing. Once, she had even turned into a sparkling pink school bus!

After taking a sip of her latte, which left frothy whiskers above her lips, and just before she could type the first word of the day, someone knocked at the door. Irritated by the interruption, she went to see who it was.

It was her neighbor, Lisa, visibly upset.

“Come in, sit down,” Elsa said. “I’ll make you a cup of tea right away. In the meantime, tell me what happened.”

“Every morning I go to my garden and pick a cucumber. I always do! For my detox water, you know? A whole pitcher of cucumber water a day… I drink it all. Keeps my skin soft.”

Elsa nodded. She had once tasted Lisa’s cucumber detox water and said, “Delicious!” to avoid hurting her feelings, but she thought it tasted like a salad-bowl rinse.

“But for three days now, whenever I go into the garden, I find cucumbers are missing!”

“What do you mean, cucumbers are missing?”

“I know every single plant personally. I talk to them, you know. Makes them happier, and the cucumbers taste better.”

Elsa nodded again, this time thinking of Bernie in the barn. If she had given a name to her scarecrow, she surely talked to her plants too. For example, she might confide her troubles to the strawberry seedlings and—

“But for a few days now,” Lisa interrupted sharply, cutting off the vision of Bernie gossiping with the strawberries, “cucumbers have been disappearing from my plants. One or two every morning. Someone is stealing my cucumbers in the night!”

“Outrageous!” a voice shouted from the doorway, and immediately a shoe—a size 43 moccasin, battered, mismatched, and looking utterly outraged—hopped toward the kitchen. Elsa caught it out of the corner of her eye and rushed to intercept it, and most importantly, to shut it up before Lisa had a heart attack.

“Stranger! I’ve told you a thousand times! You cannot do this in front of people!”

A mouth appeared on the moccasin, along with a little hand that zipped it shut. Then, the zippered-toe moccasin hopped through the cat flap.

Elsa returned to the kitchen and laid a hand on Lisa’s shoulder.

“It is outrageous!” Lisa agreed. “Help me find out who’s stealing my cucumbers at night!”

“Um, yes, of course,” Elsa replied, secretly thinking she had absolutely no desire to spend the entire night staring at Lisa’s cucumber plants.

At that moment, there was another knock at the door.

Elsa went to open it and found herself face-to-face with a lady wearing a flashy, flame-red cloak and a wide-brimmed hat of the same color, partially hiding her face.

“I’m Detective Romualda!” the woman exclaimed in a clear, ringing voice. Then she winked at Elsa and whispered, “It’s me!”

“Stranger!” Elsa whispered back. “What are you doing?”

“I’m here to help you solve the mystery of the missing cucumbers!” she exclaimed, stepping into the house.

Before Elsa could say or do anything more than, “I’ll put on another pot of tea—would you like some cookies too?” Detective Romualda, aka the Stranger, and Lisa had already made plans for the night.

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As darkness fell, Elsa peeked out of the living room window and saw the Stranger arrive at Lisa’s house and exchange a few words with her on the doorstep. Then, as Lisa went inside (Elsa followed her movements, watching the lights flick on and off as she moved from the entrance to the stairs, up to the bathroom, and finally the bedroom), the Stranger circled the house to head for the garden—red cloak, wide-brimmed hat, and all.

After several moments of internal debate and some very nervous nail-biting, Elsa decided she had to see what the Stranger was up to. Could she trust her? Probably not. Was she curious? Absolutely. It was also a golden opportunity for some fresh inspiration for her book.

Earlier in the day, she had written plenty, but had gotten stuck on a scene where the scarecrow Barney lost a moccasin, and Bernie found it near the cowshed. Elsa could not imagine a farmer putting moccasins on a scarecrow, and besides: why on earth would Bernie even have old size-43 moccasins lying around the house? Clearly, a plot hole of epic proportions. Perhaps the Stranger’s nocturnal activities could help her fill it.

So Elsa hid her long red hair under a black burglar cap, slipped into her yoga outfit (which allowed for maximum stealth and happened to be also black), and sneaked into Lisa’s garden.

The Stranger—or Detective Romualda, as she was presently officially known—was nowhere in sight.

Elsa moved cautiously among the cucumbers, carrots, lettuce, and thyme until she reached a patch planted with tomatoes. One of them, big, red, and perfectly ripe, was lying on the ground. And… had it just winked at her?

“Stranger, is that you?” she whispered, kneeling among the tomato plants and leaning in close.

In response, a splash of ketchup hit her square in the face.

“Splut!” Elsa exclaimed. “What on earth are you doing?”

The tomato sprouted two eyes and a mouth, which made it decidedly terrifying.

“I’ll be on night watch in the form of a tomato,” explained the Stranger. “That way I’ll see who’s coming to steal Lisa’s cucumbers.”

Mmm, thought Elsa. Not a bad plan at all.

She was also starting to get an idea for her moccasin problem in the novel. A thief could sneak into the farm, one wearing old size-43 moccasins. Barney the scarecrow would transform into the ripped Adonis and chase him off. The thief would run for it (who wouldn’t, seeing a scarecrow turn into a bodybuilder?) and lose the moccasins, which Barney could then keep for himself. Yes, yes… that could work… Although… now she was facing a new problem: Bernie would be frightened too, seeing the scarecrow come to life. Hm. One plot hole closed and another opened…

“Tomato calling Elsa, come in!”

The Stranger’s voice brought Elsa back to reality.

“You need to leave,” said the tomato. “Otherwise, the thief won’t come.”

Right. Elsa got up and returned to her own house.

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The next morning, Elsa was awakened by furious knocking at the door.

She rushed down the stairs to open it: the Stranger and Lisa, overexcited, were loudly talking over each other as they came in. Lisa held a pitcher filled with water, slices of cucumber floating inside.

The two of them marched straight into the kitchen without stopping their chatter, while Elsa, her hair flattened from a night’s sleep and pillow creases still stamped on her cheek, stood at the doorway, bewildered.

“Care to explain what’s going on?” she managed to ask after her first cup of coffee had kicked in.

To make a long story short: Detective Romualda, aka the Stranger, aka the tomato, had kept watch over the cucumber patch all night and discovered that the cucumber thief was… Lisa herself! Due to repeated and periodic sleepwalking episodes, she would get up at night, wander into the garden, and pick one or two cucumbers, which she then nibbled slowly before returning to bed.

Lisa laughed. “Who would have thought! All that worry for nothing. My cucumbers are safe!” she exclaimed, pouring herself another giant glass of detox water.

Elsa wasn’t entirely sure that finding out you were a sleepwalker counted as “nothing,” but she let it slide. Her mind was already racing with story ideas. What if Bernie were a sleepwalker? It would be a perfect way to meet Barney-the-muscle-mountain without having a heart attack!

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Later that day, Elsa finally managed to write the central scene of her novel. And she was very proud of herself.

Bernie’s heart galloped like a thousand wild stallions as she tiptoed into the moonlit barn. Every creak of the wooden roof boards was like a drumbeat of destiny. Her breath caught upon laying eyes on him—Barney, the humble scarecrow, now transfigured into a prodigious colossus, eyes smoldering with untold secrets.

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

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Spot Writers – “The Surprise Party” by Chiara De Giorgi

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is “Halloween with a twist.”

This week’s contribution comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara is an Italian author and currently lives in Berlin, Germany. She writes fiction, with a focus on children’s literature and science fiction. 

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“The Surprise Party” by Chiara De Giorgi

Our tradition of summer parties began when Linda and Andrew’s parents went away for a weekend.
I remember being a bit worried because I didn’t know Andrew very well yet and thought he was a dangerous guy. So I assumed his friends must be dangerous too, and imagined they’d wreck that cute little house while Linda and I hid in the closet to escape their destructive rampage.
Thankfully, reality turned out to be quite different! Neither Andrew nor his friends appeared to be dangerous guys… in fact, I ended up having some of the most interesting and intelligent conversations with them. But it’s not those clever conversations I want to talk about now. I want to tell you about last Saturday’s surprise party. I call it a “surprise party” not because it was organized without my knowledge, but because Andrew and his friends wanted to keep everything a secret from Linda and me—which meant we would be able to tell nothing to Sabrina and Isabelle, who were also invited. But we definitely knew there’d be a party. Okay, maybe I’m rambling a bit, sorry about that.


Early that afternoon, Andrew and his friends, Simon and Trevor, kicked Linda out, so she came to my place. We’re neighbors, which is very convenient: she just has to hop over the little fence, and she’s here. Even so, a typical sudden, heavy late-August rain caught her while she was crossing the fence, and she got soaked in those three feet between there and my front door. So, we had something to keep us busy for the afternoon (namely, drying her clothes and hair) while we racked our brains trying to guess what the boys were up to in the house next door. We tried to peek from my bedroom window, but it’s not at the right angle, so we ended up with stiff necks from all the twisting. My sister Marina’s room is perfect for spying on our neighbors, but she was locked in there drawing and didn’t want to be disturbed, saying we’d spoil her inspiration.

Later in the afternoon, Sabrina and Isabelle arrived at my place. They’d brought bags full of clothes, and we started trying on different outfits, also raiding my closet. The problem was, we didn’t know how to dress because we had no idea what kind of party the boys were organizing. Sabrina and Isabelle wanted to try peeking too but eventually gave up.

“Are you telling me your little brother Daniel doesn’t have a periscope mirror?” Sabrina asked at one point. “He’s always tinkering and building weird gadgets!”

Turned out, Daniel did have a periscope mirror. Full of excitement, we tried it out, only to find that Andrew and the others had hung dark sheets over the windows, so we couldn’t see a thing anyway.

When Andrew finally texted Linda to let her know the party was starting, we were all still undecided on what to wear. I thought maybe the boys would try and pull a prank on us, so I put on a silly little blue dress covered in pink flamingos (I bought it at a flea market, and I don’t know what I was thinking; I’d never had the courage to wear it, but the “surprise party” finally seemed like the right occasion).

As we walked into my neighbors’ house, we were greeted by a thick cloud of white smoke generated by a fog machine, and creaking noises and howls were playing in the background. Just a few steps in, a giant spiderweb dropped down on our heads. It was fake, of course, but in the moment, we all started screaming. Then, out of the smoke appeared the three boys. Andrew was dressed as the Joker, Trevor as Freddy Krueger, and Simon as a zombie.

Sabrina wasn’t amused and started spouting profanities nonstop. Linda and Isabelle were trying to disentangle themselves, and the more they struggled, the more tangled they got. I regretted not wearing my Grim Reaper costume that I have at the back of my closet and hated the pink flamingos on my dress more with every passing second. I’d been trying to make a good impression on Andrew, but the more I tried, the clumsier I got. Story of my life.
“Trick or treat!” the guys shouted, throwing gummy bears and Smarties at us.
I felt like laughing, but the other girls were pretty annoyed, and I didn’t want to side with those tricksters, so I just grabbed a few gummy bears while the three of them freed us from the giant spiderweb.
Then, before Sabrina, Linda, and Isabelle could follow through on their threats to slice them into pieces, Andrew, Simon, and Trevor handed us baskets to collect candy. We went outside and knocked on every door in the neighborhood, shouting “Trick or treat?” and catching all the residents off guard. This made most of them smile, and we soon gathered a decent following (led by my little brother Daniel!). By the end of our rounds, our baskets were full of all kinds of goodies. Not everyone had candy or sweets at home, so some gave us sandwiches, others offered pieces of cheese, Tupperware with pasta, meatballs, bottles of soda, and even some pork chops.
To finish off the night, we camped out in my neighbors’ yard, and it wasn’t just the four of us girls and the three masterminds of the party anymore—we’d amassed quite a crowd of kids and teens from the neighborhood.

In the midst of the chaos, Andrew came over to me and said, “You look great dressed as a flamingo!”
And that’s how that second-hand dress suddenly became my favorite piece of clothing.

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

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The Spot Writers – “Home Alone” by Chiara De Giorgi

Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is: you are home alone watching TV. The phone rings. 

This week’s contribution comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara is an Italian author and currently lives in Berlin, Germany. She writes fiction, with a focus on children’s literature and science fiction. 

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“Home Alone”

by Chiara De Giorgi

I was home alone watching TV when the phone rang.

A perfectly normal sentence if you were born in the twentieth century. But I was born in the thirtieth, and had no idea what a TV was, or a phone. As for the home… it was above ground, but not in space.

I was not prepared for such a jump back in time; I would have searched for information about that era if I’d wanted to travel so many centuries into the past. I must have made a mistake in setting the destination in the time machine. I intended to go to 2987, as a matter of fact. Not 1987. But there I was, apparently inhabiting the body of my 15-year-old ancestor of the time. My first instinct was to immediately activate the return mode and go back to my time. But curiosity got the better of me. Everything looked so strange!

I was wearing a bizarre piece of clothing that reminded me of those worn by primitives in historical depictions and covered me from the shoulders to mid-leg but left my arms exposed. The material was likely cotton, in its original form before the genetic alterations of later centuries, when most plants had to be resynthesized. Ha! I recalled something from my studies, after all, no matter what my team-mates—and my teachers—said.

Thrilled by the realization that I might actually know something about human societies that lived a thousand years before my birth, I focused and tried to remember other details. They lived in houses, that is, artificial constructions above ground but not in space. I was inside one—and I was intrigued—but what I really wanted was to see one from the outside. I was curious to see how they looked like. How could I get outside, though? There were holes in the walls, but when I looked down I became so dizzy that I dropped to the floor for fear of falling. We were too high up! Wasn’t that dangerous? I mean. Space residences are much higher up, but they’re safe, there’s no possibility of falling out. As for underground dwellings, well. You’re already underground, where could you fall? And what were they thinking, putting holes in the outer walls? Madness. Unless… Maybe they had some device that helped them float gently to the ground.

I kept looking around. The house was full of objects I could not imagine the use of. A black box with a weird shape caught my attention. I accidentally stepped on something, and the black box came to life.

I froze for a moment, thinking someone had suddenly appeared in the middle of the room. I knew they didn’t have time travel back in the twentieth century, but maybe they used teleportation? I could not remember this from my history classes. But then I realized the people were inside the black box. Fascinating! That must have been the one-thousand-year-ago version of our fun-fiction.

I was watching the screen, completely mesmerised, when I heard a ringing sound. And another. And another. I started to look around to identify the source of that sound. The cat walked up to a small object with the most peculiar shape and I followed suit. The sound was louder there. Warily, I touched it. A piece of the object broke loose, and I heard a voice come out of it.

“Hello? Hello-oh?”

“Uhm… Hello?” I said.

“I am the headmaster of ‘Tweedledum and Tweedledee High School’. I called to inform you that your daughter has skipped several hours and I wish to know whether you are aware of this and if there is a good reason.”

“Skipped hours? Could it be that there’s something wrong with the subatomic direct exchange in her tripper?”

“What? I mean history classes! And math. She has good grades, but if she does not show up, she will be failed. Rules are rules.”

“Sure. Rules are rules. No doubt about that.”

“I’m glad we’re in agreement. Will you talk to her?”

“Of course!”

“Very well. I wish you a nice day.”

“Thank you!”

The voice disappeared. After a few attempts, I managed to reposition the detached piece. A moment later, the thing rang again.

“Hello?” a different voice than the previous one said when I picked up the removable part.

“Hello?” I said. I was starting to feel more confident in this strange, alien world.

“Hello and good morning, Madame! I want to tell you about this week’s fantastic deal! By purchasing the entire encyclopaedia collection today—”

“Encyclop—What is that?” I remembered that there used to be weapons in the olden days, and I suddenly felt afraid. “Are you offering me a collection of… weapons?” The very word felt dangerous on my lips.

“Ha ha! Good one! But wait. The encyclopaedia is indeed a weapon. A weapon against… ignorance! And it sounds like you could use one, ha ha ha!”

“Is that a threat?” I was starting to sweat. Maybe I should just…

I repositioned the mobile part in its seat and the voice went quiet. When the thing started to ring again, I ignored it. This was not the adventure I had envisioned when I had activated the time machine to go to my favourite hang-out place in 2987—ending up one thousand years earlier by mistake—instead of turning on my history lesson of the day… Wait. That’s what the headmaster was talking about! This made me laugh: my ancestor skipped her history classes and, one thousand years later, I did the same.

At that moment a large hole opened in the wall and a woman walked through it.

“What are you doing here?” she asked with a frown as soon as she spotted me. “Have you skipped school again?”

“I…”

The coincidence was remarkable. Apparently, my ancestor and I had woken up with the same idea that day.

“Answer me, young lady!”

Oh, well. I certainly didn’t want to receive the scolding reserved for my ancestor. I activated the return mode and a moment later I was back at home.

“What are you doing here?”

For a moment I thought the return mode had failed, but then I realised it was my own mother who had asked the question. Uh-oh.

“Have you turned down your classes again? What was it, this time? History again? Answer me, young lady!”

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

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The Spot Writers – “Christmas Dinner” by Phil Yeats

Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this cycle is to write a piece that involves a celebration and a weather anomaly. This week’s story was written by Phil Yeats.

In April, 2024, he published The Body on Karli’s Beach, the third book in his Barrettsport Mysteries, a series of soft-boiled mysteries set in a fictional South Shore Nova Scotia town. For information about these books, and The Road to Environmental Armageddon, his trilogy about the hazards of ignoring human-induced climate change, visit his website: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

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“Christmas Dinner” by Phil Yeats

Kevin joined the writing group a few months earlier in a belated attempt to connect with humanity.

He was an orphan, a misfit with a misshapen leg. He limped when he walked and running was out of the question. It had been his reality for as long as he could remember, living in group homes and with foster parents, but never in any place for very long. He focused on the only thing he did well; his classroom schoolwork.

At seventeen, he decided on a technical rather than an academic education and graduated at 21 as a certified medical technologist. He landed a job in the pathology lab associated with the city’s largest hospital and progressed up the pay scale more rapidly than most. He was now 27, and he faced a dilemma. Should he keep his eyes focused on his laboratory bench, or respond to requests from his managers to take a greater interest in training new recruits and low-level supervisory responsibilities?

If Kevin was to consider these additional responsibilities, he needed to develop better interpersonal communication skills. He thought back to high school where he enjoyed English class, especially the opportunity to write stories. Joining a writing group seemed like an obvious move.

He arrived at his fourth meeting and Margaret, the group’s rather overbearing leader, brought him out of his comfortable role, sitting back and learning by osmosis, but saying little.

“Today,” she said, “we have a new prompt—a personal story about a family celebration. And since we are starting afresh, I think we should begin with our newest member. Kevin, do you have a story for us?”

Kevin cleared his throat as he shuffled the pages in front of him. He’d written a story and was eager to read it, but he didn’t relish the idea of going first. “I’ve written a story about the celebration of what is normally a family holiday, but as you know from what I told you at my first meeting, I have no family. This is a true story. I call it Christmas Dinner. It’s about last Christmas, when you’ll probably recall, we had a massive snowstorm.”

Christmas Dinner

On Christmas Day, I arrived home at 5 p.m. after my shift at the hospital. That was at least half an hour later than my usual arrival time, but there was a metre of snow on the main roads and more on the secondary ones. No vehicles were moving, and the sidewalks were deserted. The guy who replaced me on the skeleton holiday staff arrived on skis, and I trudged home on snowshoes. I know, what sort of weird character brings snowshoes to work, but the storm was widely predicted. I even offered to make my way back to the hospital for half of the overnight shift if his replacement didn’t show up, but that’s getting ahead of myself.

Inside the old house converted to small apartments, I found Madelyn sitting on the floor outside my door. “Mummy’s note said I should come here for dinner.”

Maddy was six years old, capable of reading a note if it was carefully printed using simple, well-spaced words, and always surprisingly happy given her less than ideal circumstances.

I couldn’t say the same for her mother, a forty something single mother on welfare with all sorts of problems. She frequently left her daughter in my care with little or no warning, and the social workers seemed happy with this makeshift arrangement.

I unlocked my door, and Maddy scurried inside clutching the doll I’d bought her for Christmas.

“Did your mum say when she’d be back?” I asked.

She shook her head before jumping onto the chair closest to my wall screen TV. “Can I watch Sesame Street?”

The power was off, but I located a Sesame Street Christmas video on my laptop. I placed it in front of her and retreated to my kitchen to sort out something we could prepare on my deck using my camp stove. I soon had spaghetti sauce heating on one burner and the noodles on another. Not quite your standard Christmas celebration meal, but something I knew she’d enjoy.

When I had everything under control, I phoned her mother’s social worker. I was surprised when she picked up. I described the situation and asked for her advice.

“We’re swamped here, dealing with dozens at risk during this storm. It’s good to know Madelyn’s safe. If her mother doesn’t return this evening, can you look after her?”

“Tonight and tomorrow, but Thursday will be a problem. I’m back at work Thursday at noon.”

After I ended the call, I remembered my offer to return to the lab during the night if necessary. I had a momentary panic, but it all worked out in the end. We had dinner rather later than usual for a six-year-old and shortly after, Maddy had a bath (there was no bathtub in her mother’s tiny apartment) and got ready for bed in a cot I set up in the little alcove that was usually my home office. At three a.m., I got her bundled up and towed her back to the hospital on a sled with broad runners I borrowed from another neighbour. She went back to sleep on the daybed in the path lab’s break room.

At 8:30, the power was back on, and we were home for breakfast and another twenty-four hours when I was responsible for a beautiful little girl. We went sledding on a nearby hill and finally got around to having a more traditional Christmas dinner on Boxing Day.

She cried when the social worker arrived on Thursday morning to take her into care. “But I like it here with Kevin, and Mummy will know where to find me. This was the best Christmas ever.”

Kevin placed the pages with his story on the table and gazed at the writing group members. “That was the day I realized I must make a serious effort to connect with humanity.”

*****

The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com

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The Spot Writers – “Pizza” by Val Muller

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is (appropriately): heatwave. Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit mystery series Corgi Capers.

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“Pizza” by Val Muller

Normally, Verona would have walked to the grocery, but in this heat wave, everything would spoil by the time she got home. Ice cream would melt, corn would steam, eggs would hard boil themselves in their carton.

Uber was so expensive, though. So she walked to the grocery, her reusable bags sweaty in her hands. At least walking to the store would save money. Then she could order an Uber for the way back.

When the swoosh of the grocery doors ushered in a blast of cool air, Verona was too relieved to remember to check the app. Instead, she sauntered down the aisles, taking her time choosing from the boxes of pasta, the canned goods, the cereals. She even stopped for a moment to chat with Burton, the neighbor from Apartment 3B. He seemed nice enough, but socially awkward for sure. He stood too close, spoke too robotically. He was there to buy half a cake—for his sister’s half birthday, he explained. His family was one of those families with time and money to think of things like half birthdays.

Normally, Verona would have squirmed out of the conversation—Burton had asked her to join him for pizza once, then tacos, and she had said no both times, still unsure if he meant it as friends or a date—but the cool air conditioning encouraged her to linger. In fact, the conversation lasted long enough for her to learn that Burton would be visiting his sister in the morning—it was his turn to bring the half-cake. For her half-birthday gift, he had bought her a set of geode earrings.

“Because they’re cut in half,” he explained, waiting for her to admire the punchline of the half-birthday gift.

After parting ways with Burton, Verona savored the produce aisle and saved the frozen foods section for last, when the last of the sweat evaporated from her clothes and made her feel human again.

And, of course, since she would have a ride back this time, she over-shopped. This was three times as many things as she would buy for herself if she planned to walk home, but the sales were good and the air conditioning was even better, so might as well stock up.

She checked out and piled her bags into a shopping cart, wheeling it outside to be met with the inferno of boiling, baking summer heat, the kind that sizzles everything and everyone, and patience as well.

She squinted her eyes to meet her Uber driver.

Until she remembered she had not scheduled an Uber driver.

Sure, she could go back inside, but there was ice cream and raw meat and all kinds of things that should make their way to a freezer as soon as possible given the current heat advisory. Stupid, stupid.

She cursed under her breath and turned back to the store, and in the sudden movement, her shopping cart crashed head-first into Burton’s.  He was also leaving the store with a cart full of goods.

“Sorry,” she mumbled, pulling out her phone with one hand and trying to open the app.

“Forget something?” he asked. “I always forget things.” He leaned over his cart to see if his half-birthday cake had survived the collision. It seemed fine.

“Yeah, I forgot my ride,” she mumbled.

His smile came quickly. “I know someone who just happens to be driving to your very same apartment.”

Of course she accepted the ride. No one could blame her for accepting the ride. Burton was kind, helping to load the groceries, though he made an awkward joke about their bags getting mixed up. She supposed he wasn’t that bad; it was just that her high school self would have kicked her current self for socializing with someone like that. On the way home, he talked about Star Wars and Lord of the Rings. He had never been to a sports event or a concert in his life.

“Pizza?” he asked.

She had zoned out, but they had just pulled into the parking lot of their building.

“Sorry, what?”

“I said, want to unload our groceries and then maybe order a pizza?”

She raised an eyebrow at the absurdity of it: unloading bags and bags of groceries and then calling out for a pizza. But as soon as the car door opened, the heat poured in, and she realized she had no will to cook tonight. Besides, maybe Burton wasn’t so bad. She had known for a year now that she needed to make more friends since graduating college, and at some point, she just had to look back over the years and tell her high school self that she had it all wrong.

At least during a heatwave.  

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The Spot Writers—Our Members: 

Val Muller: http://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

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The Spot Writers – “Spud” by Val Muller

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is “A character faces an important decision” with bonus  points if it doesn’t mention COVID 😊

This week’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, who is in the home stretch of the longest and weirdest year of her teaching career. She wrote this tale while driving (composed via speak-to-text) during a particularly stressful week. If you’d like lighter fare, you can check out her Corgi website at www.corgicapers.com.

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Spud” by Val Muller

When I was ten, I had a dream—a nightmare, really. There was this creepy glowing clown. It happened the one time I watched a scary movie from the top of the stairs while my parents thought I was in bed. I swear, as I crouched at the top of the banister to peer at the television, I heard breathing behind me. I never turned to look, and the breathing left me too terrified to return to bed. I only sprang back to my room on an adrenaline rush when I heard my parents coming up for the night.

I’m sure it was the clown breathing behind me, toying with me. He certainly came to me in that dream, where he showed up, laughing maniacally, and told me I would always choose the potatoes.

I was terrified of that clown, let me tell you. I don’t think I can really put it in words. It’s not circus clowns and super-slow kid songs sung off-key. That’s the fun kind of scary. This clown wasn’t the fun kind. He’s sort of like zombies—the idea of being dead but not. Souless, maybe. A monster. The whole something-beyond-mortality… or maybe nothing. The way he said potatoes. I know it sounds comical when I say it out loud. Believe me, if I could erase that dream from my life, I would. And I only wish this were funny instead of pathetically terrifying. When he said potatoes, his voice was the grizzled rasp of death. His assertion—that I would always choose potatoes—was a threat I didn’t understand.

Starting that next morning, whenever I had an option to choose potatoes, I chose them. I mean ridiculously so. It earned me the nickname Tater in school because every day at the cafeteria I would choose tater tots. I mean, I would have potatoes covered in ketchup, tater tots on my salad, mashed potatoes with a side of French fries. If potatoes were offered—on a menu, in a conversation—I took them.

I never actually told anyone the reason for it. Everyone just thought it was my quirk. I can’t tell you how many potato gag gifts I’ve received over the years. Potato figures, t-shirts, plushies. To be honest, I don’t even like potatoes that much. They remind me of a grave—you know, how the dirt kind of piles up and is clumpy but moist. That’s what potatoes are like. A freshly-dug grave.

When I went away to college, I promised myself I would start fresh. But every line in the dining hall has potatoes of some sort. I could hardly disguise my strange choices, and though I managed to shed my “Tater” nickname, my freshman hall affectionately called me “Spud.” Now, after my second year of college, I feel like I’m at that point where something has to be done. Am I really going to let a dream from when I was ten dictate the rest of my life?

Dad came with the SUV to pack up my sophomore year dorm room. I would be living off-campus the next year, and I had fantasies of going grocery shopping and not buying any potatoes every again. But the back of my mind wondered: if I walked past the potatoes, or a box of potato flakes, or a frozen case of French fries, would I have to choose them? I imagined my future apartment’s freezer, packed full of frozen spuds.

Things were becoming ridiculous.

We loaded Dad’s SUV with all my stuff, and then I fell asleep on the way home. I woke when we took a sharp turn off an exit ramp. My dad kind of reached over and kept my whole body from sliding too far to the left on the leather passenger seat. He said “Good morning, sunshine” the same way he said it when I was a kid. And then he offered me the choice.

It was a split-second decision I had to make while still not fully awake. He said we were stopping for lunch. There was a food truck with lobster rolls advertised with hand-written signs along the highway. Then there was the typical fast-food corridor that I knew would be chock-full of potatoes. My dad smiled sadly at me.

“I know you have a thing for potatoes, and since you’re the guest of honor this summer, I’ll let you choose, but I sure could use a good old New England lobster roll.”

“Does the food truck have fries?” I asked.

Dad shrugged. “I need to know. This is our turn.”

We approached a traffic light. On the light post, a handwritten sign pointed left with “lobster rolls” written in permanent marker. Metal signs with all manner of fast-food logos pointed to the right. I looked left, down what seemed to be a country road. Dad hovered between two lanes, and the car behind us beeped: we had to choose a lane.

It was a split-second decision, and I said “Food truck.”

I imagined how the lobster roll would taste—the delicious sweet lobster meat, the friend butter-grilled roll with its subtle crunch. There would be no need for French fries. In fact, I hoped there would not be any.

Dad shifted to the left-turn lane, which had a red light. The right lane, where the impatient car behind us sped, had a green arrow. I watched him turn, and I watched as out of nowhere, a huge truck barreled through the intersection just as the car in the right-turn lane turned right on the green arrow.

I’ll never forget the crunch of that truck hitting the car. Hitting the car that would have been ours if I had chosen the potatoes.

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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