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The Spot Writers – “Girls and Dolls”

Welcome to The Spot Writers.

Along with several short story collections and books of poetry, Cathy has published two novels: WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel/stand-alone novel. She has also written two volumes of grief poetry in memory of her son Matthew that she hopes might help other grieving parents: MY HEART IS BROKEN and BROKEN HEARTS CAN’T ALWAYS BE FIXED.

This month’s prompt is to begin with this sentence: “When he was a child he’d been told dolls were for girls.”

Cathy continues with her Melvin saga (someday to be a complete novel!)…

***

“Girls and Dolls”

When he was a child, he’d been told dolls were for girls. Melvin didn’t know what to make of that statement. Both his mother and his father had told him that, but he’d buried the statement away for many years—until his girls died, when childhood memories resurfaced…

When he was a child,

He’d been told dolls were for girls,

Girls! Diamonds and pearls,

Sugar, spice, everything mild.

*

But who believes parents, fools,

And other stodgy old folk?

Melvin thought it a joke,

Never enjoyed following rules.

*

He stole a doll from his sister,

Kept it close to his chest,

Always had it well-dressed,

Too often he kissed her.

*

He played with the doll

Hidden from everyone,

When day was done

In the dark he did sprawl.

*

When his kids were born

The girls received dolls

And William received balls,

Melvin burnt his old doll as if porn.

*

He’d never allow his son

William to play with dollies,

Those Millies, Pollys, and Mollys

Despite the fun they spun.

*

Alas, his girls sadly died,

Their dolls in the trash, tossed

By Marie, Such a monstrous loss!

But Melvin’s hands were not tied.

*

He managed to save one

That he hid in the closet, in a box,

What a sly fox!

And his lie continued to spun…

*

He reached for that darling doll

When missing his two girls,

Their blue eyes, blonde curls,

And he did painfully bawl.

*

He’d pretend his sweet girls

Sat calmly beside him

Whether in light bright or dim,

And he’d stroke their curls.

*

Marie’d never understand,

It was his only (cough!) white lie

From her, But why?

Would Marie have him banned?

*

But when Kailani appeared

He decided to end his obsession,

Quit the occasional doll-session

That people would term weird.

*

Kailani gave him such sweet joy,

But ’twas another secret in life

That he must hide from his wife,

But better than craving a girl’s toy.

***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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The Spot Writers – “Doorbells and Phone Calls” by Cathy MacKenzie

Welcome to The Spot Writers.

Along with several short story collections and books of poetry, Cathy has published two novels: WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel/stand-alone novel. She has also written two volumes of grief poetry in memory of her son Matthew that she hopes might help other grieving parents: MY HEART IS BROKEN and BROKEN HEARTS CAN’T ALWAYS BE FIXED.

This month’s prompt: Write a story where someone gets an unexpected phone call.

Cathy continues with Melvin and his family…

***

“Doorbells and Phone Calls”

1 – The Doorbell

“Who’s that at the door?” Marie asked.

 “Dunno.” Melvin stood. “I’ll get it.” He ambled to the front door.

“Hel—lo,” he said, opening the door to a young woman.

“Hi. I—”

Melvin noticed her good looks. Only about twenty, if that. Maybe a teen still. Who could tell the ages of young people today? If he squinted, she almost resembled Kailani; she was that gorgeous. “Can I help you?”

“Yeah. I—are you Melvin MacDonald?”

“I am. And you are?”

“I’m Katie. I might as well say it, eh? I’m your daughter. Katie, your daughter.”

“Ah, no. I don’t have a daughter. Well, I did have two once upon a time. Both drowned.”

The young girl frowned. “Drowned? How awful for you. Oh, and for me, too. I’ll never get to meet my sisters.”

“But I still have a son. You can meet him. William, your bro—what the heck am I saying? You’re not my daughter. My family’s here. Here with me. In this house. Not on the front step. Where have you come from? Why are you here?”

“My mother. She’s Rita Stevenson. Remember her?”

“Rita Stevenson? Can’t say I do.”

“You guys went to school together. You dated for a while. My mom told me so.”

“Rita?” He vaguely remembered a couple of girls he’d dated in high school, but he hadn’t gone “all the way” with any of them if that was her implication. Or had he? Hard to remember what he’d done eons ago, not once alcohol and weed were thrown into the mix.

“I don’t recall her. I think you’re mistaken. Or your mother—Rita—is.” He gripped the doorknob, ready to push it shut. Must get rid of her before Marie and William appeared.

“Who’s there, Melvin?”

“Yeah, Dad, who’s there?”

“I’m sorry,” Melvin said to the girl. “Gotta go. We’re in the middle of dinner.”

“But—I—I need to talk to you. Dad.”

“Dad?”

Melvin turned to see William.

“Dad?” William repeated. “Why’s this stranger calling you ‘Dad’?”

“Just mistaken identity,” Melvin said. “Come on. Back to dinner.”

The girl placed her foot on the threshold. A little too forcefully, Melvin thought.

“We need to talk.” She glared at Melvin and looked at William, examining him from head to toe, and smiled. “I’m your sister.”

William glanced at his father. When his mother appeared, William looked at her. “Who is this, Mom? She says she’s my sister.”

Marie looked first at Melvin. Then at her son. “No, you don’t have a sister, William. They both drowned, remember?”

“Melvin’s my father,” the girl said. “My mother told me so. So I’m here, to meet him. He’s neglected me all these years.”

“I didn’t neglect you. I didn’t know you even existed. You still don’t. My daughters are dead.”

“Well, I’m not. I’m here. In the flesh and blood.” Her blue eyes flashed.

“I don’t know what’s going on here.” Melvin flailed his arms. “Everyone calm down until I get to the bottom of this. Imposters appear every day, just like on the internet. Emailing you’ve won twenty million dollars if you’ll give me your bank information. Or help me come to your country and you can have ten percent of my inheritance, which amounts to zillions of dollars. Yes, there’s suckers born every day. But not me.”

“This isn’t about the internet,” the girl said.

“Maybe you should go to your room, William,” Melvin said, “until I figure this out.”

“No, Dad, I want to know what’s going on.”

“William, stop it. Marie, the two of you go to the kitchen while I handle this.”

William and Marie remained rooted to the floor. Melvin focused on the individual on the doorstep who seemed primed to barge uninvited into the house.

“Okay, what is this?” Melvin finally said. “Some kind of joke? Halloween’s long past, you know. Or are you early?”

“Dad—”

“Don’t call me Dad. You don’t have that right.”

“Yeah, he’s not your father,” William piped up. “He’s mine. I’ve been with him all my life. You haven’t.”

“William, Marie. I thought I told you both to leave this to me.”

The girl gripped her handbag to her side. “I’m sorry. Like I said, I’m looking for my father. I believe you’re him.” She eyed Melvin.

“Hey, don’t know what games you’re playing, but we’re just a normal family living a normal life. I’m a hardworking guy. I don’t have a lot of money if that’s what you’re—”

“I told you. I’m just looking for my father. I’ve been looking for you for five years now. Over five years, actually.”

“Well, I’m not him. Time to go now. And tell your mother she’s mistaken me for someone else.”

“Melvin, you have a kid and never told me?” Marie said.

“What about me, Mom? He didn’t tell me either.”

“William, hush. I think we should let your father handle this.” Marie threw Melvin one of her evil eyes before dragging William away. “Can’t believe you cheated on me,” she mumbled.

“I heard that, Marie. And I haven’t cheated on anyone, so don’t talk fibs.”

Melvin turned to Katie. “Listen, you’re destroying us. See how upset my family is? You need to leave. Go back to Rhoda Stetson, or whatever her name is. Tell her she’s mistaken. I never had sex with her. Never had sex with anyone until my wife.” He hoped his face didn’t give him away. He’d had sex previous to Marie. With several women—girls—but he was quite certain he didn’t impregnate any of them. He used protection every time. His mother, God rest her soul, had harped about it enough that condoms were always forefront on his mind (and conveniently, thanks to her, in his pockets). “You need some proof if you think I’m your father. Proof! You get it? Proof! You just can’t come here and upset my kid and my wife. And me. I’m upset, too, in case you don’t know.”

“It’s Rita. Her name is Rita. Rita Stevenson. My mother. Mom said she was certain.”

“I ain’t taking no DNA tests, either. You better come up with another means of proof.”

Did he detect a tear forming in her eye?

“You know, I almost hope you aren’t my father. You’re so mean. But Mom’s certain, and I believe her.”

“Again, you better get some proof. And until you have definitive proof, don’t bug me again.” He managed to close the door on her. Locked it behind him, too. Who knew what the fool girl might do. Rita/Rhoda? Who in the heck…

2 – The Phone Call

Melvin had never experienced such a week. Life hadn’t been the same since the ring of the doorbell when the Kailani look-alike appeared.

“I told you, Marie. She’s not my kid. And even if she was, it was years before we met. Had nothing to do with you. I never cheated on you. Never lied. Never knew I had a ‘supposed’ kid to even lie about.”

He thought he’d finally gotten through to her. And to William, too, but Marie wouldn’t give up on the silent treatment, and William wouldn’t quit with the nosey questions.

Melvin hadn’t slept since that day. What if the girl was his daughter? What if she went to the police? Or to a lawyer. Would he be stuck with twenty-plus years of child support? Marie would never forgive him. Would this nightmare ever be over?

Exactly eight days after that fateful doorbell (surprisingly, the girl hadn’t reappeared on the doorstep), the phone rang minutes after they’d sat down to pizza. Melvin had a premonition it was the girl, but no, it couldn’t be; she didn’t have their phone number. “Don’t answer it,” he said when William jumped up. “We’re eating dinner.”

“But Dad, we haven’t answered the phone for over a week. I know it’s Evan. We need to discuss homework. He said he was gonna call me tonight. We talked about it in school today.”

He couldn’t say no to his one surviving kid, could he? “Fine. Answer it.”

William scampered to the phone. “Really need to get a cell, Dad,” he muttered.

“Yeah, some year.”

Melvin watched William’s face as he answered and listened to the caller. Didn’t appear to be Evan.

“Dad,” he finally whispered, placing the phone on the counter. “It’s that girl. Pretty certain it’s her. My sister.”

“Cripes, she’s not your sister, William. Get that through your head.”

Melvin grudgingly set down his half-eaten slice of pizza and ambled to the phone. “Yeah, it’s me. Me. Melvin. Not your father. Me! Melvin!”

Silence.

“Yeah, really?”

Silence.

“Yeah, okay.”

More silence.

“Goodbye. And good luck to you.”

Marie eyed him as he sauntered back to the table. “What’s happened, Melvin?”

“All a misunderstanding. Marie, she’s not my daughter. William, she’s not your sister. The mother made a mistake. Thought it was me, but turns out it was Martin MacDonald. Martin! Not Melvin!”

“Martin MacDonald? Who’s he?” Marie asked.

“Haven’t a clue. Another classmate, I suppose. Just as I don’t remember that Rita, I don’t remember him. Turns out it was an honest mistake on the girl’s part. Or maybe it was the mother. I dunno, but how either one would make a mistake like that, I don’t know. Caused too much upheaval in my life, that’s for sure. I should sue them.” He sighed and picked up his half-eaten pizza slice.

“You must’ve had sex with her, or why would she say or think such a thing about you?”

“Marie, this is a conversation for later, after William goes to bed.”

“Dad, I know about sex, you know. You didn’t tell me about the bees and birds, but I learned anyhow.”

“You did?” Marie and William chimed in unison.

“I did. And how come neither of you saw fit to explain the bees and birds to me?”

Melvin let his slice of pizza plop onto the plate. “I truly don’t remember her. I truly don’t remember having sex with anyone in high school, either. Anyhow, it’s over and done with now. She’s moved on to the next sucker. And William, let that be a lesson. No sex before marriage. Saves a lot of hassles. Hopefully you’ve learned from this experience.”

William snickered. “Yeah, sure, Dad. Saves a lot of hassles.”

“William!” Marie scolded. “Watch your manners.”

“He doesn’t have manners, Marie. No manners in this household.” Melvin wondered if Katie had manners. What if she were his kid? Would he be happier? William might be. Marie, not so much. “Okay, let’s finish the pizza. Tomorrow’s another day.”

“Yeah, what’s gonna happen tomorrow, Dad?”

“Yeah, what’s gonna happen tomorrow, Melvin?”

***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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The Spot Writers – “Halloween Visitors”

Welcome to The Spot Writers.

Along with short story compilations and books of poetry, Catherine A. MacKenzie has published two novels: WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel/stand-alone novel (18+).  She has also written two volumes of grief poetry that she hopes might help other grieving parents: MY HEART IS BROKEN and BROKEN HEARTS CAN’T ALWAYS BE FIXED.

This month’s prompt: autumn/Halloween. Write a story where a literal or metaphorical ghost plays a prominent role.

Note: It’s amazing Cathy has been able to complete this task. Moses S. MacKenzie joined her family a week ago today. She thought the sweet little guy would keep her young; alas, she fears she’s aged twenty years. Look for Moses’ Facebook Page: “Moses the Maltipoo.”

Cathy continues with Melvin and his foibles. Melvin has more than one ghost visit him this Halloween…

***

Halloween Visitors

“William, what are you going to be this Halloween?”

“Dunno. Haven’t much thought about it. I have another couple of days.”

“Time’s passing, son. You shouldn’t leave everything ‘til the last minute.”

“Dad, I’m not. Give me a break, will ya!”

“Just checking, William. Just checking.”

“Yeah, I know. I’ll come up with something. Going to my room now, that okay?”

“Son, of course. You can go to your room anytime you wish.”

“Okay, then. Bye. I’m leaving.”

Melvin watched his son disappear down the hallway to the bedrooms.

“I’m gone, Dad,” William yelled. “I’m gone.”

“I see, William. You are gone. Sure enough.” Melvin sighed. Mostly for effect. Not that anyone would hear him. Marie was out somewhere—who knew where. William hadn’t heard him. “Goodbye, wife. Goodbye son.” He fleetingly thought of his two girls, both of whom had perished within the deep of the great big sea. He shook his head. That was the previous summer. Enough time had passed. “They” (and Google) say grieving is one year max. Must get them out of his head. Out of his mind. Death’s not an easy subject to deal with, especially when it’s your flesh and blood. And children, at that. Young children who hadn’t even experienced the heartbreaks and highs of life. Two children who wouldn’t be able to dress up for Halloween…

He rubbed his eyes and picked up his phone from the coffee table. Today was Thursday. October twenty-seventh. Halloween but a scant four days away, on Monday. He couldn’t remember what had taken place the previous October. 

Hadn’t Marie talked to William, to get his costume rolling? Heck, Halloween arrived but once a year. Must take advantage of it. If he—Melvin—were shorter (and not so hefty), he would dress up and prowl the neighbourhood. Be a ghost. Jump out at innocent kids. What a riot that would be.

Hmmm, he thought. Maybe I should do it anyhow. But if Marie got aboard, he could ditch the ghost idea, and they could dress as Ginger and Fred, not that she’d much appreciated the Ginger/Fred fiasco during Hurricane Fiona, when they’d danced in the rain. Fred hadn’t minded.

“Yeah,” he mumbled. “I’ll dress up this year. It’ll be fun. William can go as our son. As Fred and Gingers’ son.” Did Fred and Ginger have a son? Hmmm, he thought. No clue. I’ll have to check with Google.


***

In the end, they didn’t want to dress up. Not Marie. Not William. Stick-in-the-muds, Melvin thought. Party poopers and whatever other names I can come up with. Slackers. Duds? Yeah, duds. They’re both duds. Slackers, too.

Melvin wasn’t about to trick-’n-treat alone, not even as a ghost. That would look more than foolish. He’d not look like a teenager. Householders would call him out. He’d feel like The Fool. Nope, didn’t need that stress.

Halloween night dawned dark and dreary. With a slight drizzle of mist-that-might-turn-into-rain. Not as bad as November eleventh, which seemed to bring out weather’s worst. But he and his family dressed for the elements and headed to the local cenotaph anyhow. They’d reverently stand, listen, bow their heads. All in the name of the veterans. A noble cause, for sure. November eleventh was high on Melvin’s list. Should be on everyone’s list, he thought. But, no, young people today can’t relate to horrors of wars.

Back to Halloween…

William wanted to stay home to watch a Halloween movie, the name of which Melvin didn’t catch. Marie said she’d watch it with him. Perhaps she didn’t want him to be scared.

“You can answer the door, Mel,” Marie said. “There’s the candy.” She pointed to a large plastic pumpkin full of wrapped candy.

“Will this be enough?”

“If it isn’t, just turn off the lights and lock the doors.”

“Then what?”

“What do you mean ‘then what’?”

“What do I do then? I can’t sit up here alone in the dark.”

“We’ll be in your man cave, Mel. Come down and join us if that happens. We’d love to have you.”

He looked at the clock. A little after five. He glanced outdoors. Still bright despite the drizzle. He eyed the table: set with food. “Let’s dig in.” He forgot his woes and joined his wife and son at the table.

After Marie cleaned away the dishes and the food he’d accidentally dropped on the floor, she called for William and the two disappeared down the stairs.

Melvin pulled apart the living room drapes. Kinda dark out there, he thought. Where is everyone? I should scoff all the candy for myself. And/or take a sheet from the closet and prowl the streets. Do my own thing: scare the kids and—

The first doorbell of the night.

He raced to the door. Opened it. Faced two costumed kids. “Where’s your parents?” he asked.

“Home,” the smaller kid said.

“Dangerous to be out here alone at your ages, you know.”

“Hey mister, I’m fifteen. He’s sixteen. We’re good. Where’s the loot?”

“Okay, then.” Melvin scooped out a fistful of treats and dumped them into the two sacks. He tried to make sure he gave less to the mouthy kid. What the heck! Such misbehaviour. “Take care,” he added, happy to see them turn and disappear into the night.

“Marie,” he screeched. “I don’t like doing this.”

He listened intently. No reply.

The bell rang again.

He raced to the door. Opened it. Faced two young females who reminded him of his deceased girls. Similar colour hair peeked out from their masks. “Sophie? Penny? My daughters?” He reached out to touch—

“Heck no, we’re not your daughters, mister. You a pervert? I’m gonna report you to my father when we get home.”

Melvin dumped the pumpkin holdings into their bags, not caring whether he’d divvied it up equally, and slammed the door.

“Sure looked like Sophie and Penny,” he mumbled, rubbing his eyes. What the heck! Had he had one too many beers?

When the bell rang seconds later, he ignored it. “Go away,” he mumbled. “Candy’s all gone. I had some weak moments.”

“Melvin, it’s me.”

He stopped in his tracks. Looked around. Had the voice even come from the door? “Me? Who is ‘me’?”

“Me. Kailani.”

“Go away!”

He had almost reached the stairs to HIS man cave (why the heck were his wife and son there and not him? What gave them the right?) when he heard the voice again.

“Let me in. I miss you.”

What? Someone misses me? Yeah, okay…

He slowly approached the front door. Took a deep breath and opened the door to face a beautiful woman. In costume, of course. A mermaid costume. “It’s me. Kailani.”

“Yeah, right.” He slammed the door. Locked it.

He raced to the linen closet. Grabbed a white sheet. Ambled to the full-size mirror and draped it over himself. Couldn’t see, of course. He yanked it off. Found a pair of scissors on the dresser and, after much ado, managed to cut out two holes for eyes. “This’ll do,” he mumbled.

Wearing the “costume,” he slipped out the back door and headed around to the driveway. He’d turned off the outdoor lights (as Marie had so sweetly suggested), and headed to the road, which had few streetlights. He turned right. Glanced back toward his house shrouded in darkness. No kid would go down that long driveway, not without beckoning lights at the end.

A parade of kids strolled on the opposite side of the road. He ducked behind a tree until they passed him. He darted out. Crossed the road and followed. When the last bunch turned down a driveway, he traipsed after them for a few yards and then hid behind another tree. He waited impatiently for their return—when they would receive the Halloween Fright of Their Lives.

He took a deep breath. There they were, sauntering along, carrying their pillowcases of loot. Wonder if they stole Marie’s pillowcases. Look just like my sheet.

He jumped out. “Boo!”

He giggled. How funny was this?

“Boo!” he shrieked again.

The three kids (a pirate, a superman, and a mermaid) backed up like petrified puppies. Even behind their masks, he sensed their fear.

“What?” He took another look. A mermaid?

“Kailani, what you doing here?”

The pirate took off his mask.

Superman took off his mask.

What the heck! Girls: his daughters. Had Kailani, the magic mermaid, managed to bring them back to life?

He rubbed his eyes. Clutched his belly. How did they even know who he was? He was hidden within the sheet, with only his eyes exposed.

“We see you,” they all chimed. “We see you. We have X-ray vision.”

Melvin turned. Sped across the street. Sped past neighbours’ houses. Sped down his long, winding driveway. Sped around to the back of the house.

He collapsed, so out of breath he didn’t think he’d ever see next day’s light. His chest pounded.

He closed his eyes. Saw his girls. Saw Kailani.

No, those trick-’n-treaters weren’t his girls (Marie made four, but she was safe in his man cave); they were simply tricksters. It was Halloween, after all. That’s what kids did. Pretended to be who or what they weren’t.

And that’s what grownups did: jumped out at kids to scare them shoeless. That’s what Melvin had done. And his father before him. “It’s your fault, Dad. It’s your fault.” Would he see his father next? He’d been gone over twenty years. Would the next trick-or-treater pretend to be his dear departed Dad?

He clutched his belly. Give your head a shake, Melvin. Wake up! You’re in a dream.

He pinched his arm. That’s what you’re supposed to do, right? Pinch your arm to wake up from a nightmare? Yes. But no—no dream.

He tossed the soiled sheet into the green bin and headed indoors. He’d join Marie and William in his man cave, where he’d be safe from Halloween demons.

***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com


Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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The Spot Writers – “One Boring Day” by Cathy MacKenzie

Welcome to The Spot Writers.

The task this month is to write a story where something yellow is important in the plot. It can be any object but using the colour yellow or whatever yellow you can think of.

Catherine A. MacKenzie’s novels, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel/stand-alone novel (18+), are available on Amazon.

Last month, Cathy continued Melvin’s story. If you’ll recall, Melvin was in rant-mode, upset at the world, what with a dragging winter and spring, not to mention Covid and his usual life issues. He was looking forward to summer—to be kayaking and, hopefully, seeing Kailani again…

***

“One Boring Day” by Cathy MacKenzie

I yawned and lazily rolled over, sensing without reaching across the bed that Marie was long gone. A second later, I heard dishes rattling in the kitchen. A little too loudly for my liking, almost as if to tick me off. And on a Saturday when a man should be able to rest in peace!

Despite wanting to satisfy my growling stomach, I pulled the comforter over my head to drown out the echoes in the hopes of another hour of shut-eye.

Didn’t work.

I got up. Joined the dull, gloomy day with its forecast of rain.

The rainy morning passed, as boring as Saturdays always are in this household. The kids were with their grandparents for the day, which gave major respite, and after lunch, Marie left for her quilting bee. Or maybe it was her knitting klatch—whatever it is she does with her group of women. Most likely gossiping and such.

After lunch, I napped on the couch. Woke up around two o’clock to a bright light streaming through the living room window.

I raced to the window. Had to shade my eyes from the blinding ball.

The sun!

The rain had ceased, and the lake was as calm as melted butter on a sweltering summer’s day.

My heart raced! Kayak time? Could it be?

Yes!

My mouth salivated. Would this be the first time this season to see Kailani?

I changed into shorts and T-shirt, grabbed the cabin keys, and sprinted down the narrow path to the lake. All the while, my heart beat a million miles a minute. Anticipation, of course!

I unlocked the cabin door. My kayak, which I had named the “Blue Origin” after Bezo’s rocket ship, rested on the red shag rug, where I’d left it in the fall. I dragged it out of the cabin and onto the lawn. I returned inside for the paddle and life vest. Gotta be safe in the great big sea, right? Can’t take chances on a storm coming out of nowhere. Gotta be prepared at all times. I learned my lesson the hard way though I do believe all three of my kids wore life vests. Whether they did or not, one died: William, my only son.

I looked to the sky, to the ball of yellow that still nearly blinded me. I shook my fist at the heavens, at a god that would take my only son. He—God—wasn’t watching, of course. Never is. Doesn’t pay attention to us atheists; I’m quite certain of that. Never mind. Kailani will make me forget my troubles.

I hauled everything down to the water.

Porters Lake, connected to the Atlantic Ocean near Lawrencetown Beach, was as calm as it had appeared from the house. Looks are often deceiving, but—hurrah!—not on this day. The sun beat down, hot to trot on this early June day. Had to have been close to ninety degrees Fahrenheit. Just as I like it.

I waded into the nippy water and hopped in the kayak. Off I went, paddling into the middle of the lake toward the beckoning myriad of small islands. A body could get lost on one of them—if one so desired—perhaps never to be found again. Even someone not-so-desiring.

A sudden thought! Could William be stranded on one of them? Could he be awaiting rescue by his father? It had been many months since he disappeared—gone all winter, in fact—but miracles happen, right?

I was close to home, not down the lake to the right where we’d had our mishap the previous summer. No way could he be here. He’d be out farther, at the other side of the lake and closer to the ocean, where the waves and wind would have taken him, not in this calm area.

I shook my head. Memories, be gone! Look to brighter things. Kailani—the gorgeous mermaid who’d come to me the previous summer and took me for a soaring kayak ride into the sky and deposited me safely back on ground. We’d soared as if my kayak was Santa’s sled. And me—it was as if I were Santa, high upon the throne! She was like Rudolph, leading the way.

I yearned to see her again. I furiously paddled. Yelled to that ball of yellow in the sky: “Kailani, you there?”

I paused. Let the oar relax in my hands.

Silence.

Nothing.

Alas.

Then—a shadow. Could it be?

I looked around, just having gotten my hopes up, when darkness surrounded me. In the distance, the heavens roared.

I paddled furiously toward shore, against the sudden rain and wind that threatened to overturn the kayak.

Kailani, where are you? I pictured joining William in the depths of the ocean (wherever that was) if she didn’t rescue me.

But, somehow, miraculously, I reached the dock. I hauled the kayak out of the water. My stomach growled even though Marie had prepared me a hearty breakfast of eggs, bacon, and toast. A thick, juicy steak would do wonders to calm my spirit. I can only hope that Marie stopped at the store on her way home. If not, I’ll stick her in her yellow 2012 Kia Soul and point her in the direction of Sinclair’s Meat Market.

God willing, the rest of the summer awaits. I’m confident Kailani will appear another day.

(This was a boring day, but it was the first day of the kayaking season and you can’t expect much on the first day, right? Stay tuned for upcoming amazing adventures.)

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The Spot Writers – “The Itch” by Cathy MacKenzie

Welcome to The Spot Writers.

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie’s novels, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel or stand-alone novel (18+), are available on Amazon.

March prompt: Must include a spider as part of the plot. The spider can be present, mentioned, real, or metaphorical. 

Cathy continues with her Melvin sagas…

 

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“The Itch” by Cathy MacKenzie

 

Marie hates spiders.

 

I decide to get even with her. I’m sick of her not getting dinner on the table precisely at 5:00 p.m. Not rolling my socks properly. Leaving my undershorts on top of the dresser instead of putting them in the drawer. (She complains I’m picky about my socks and underwear—which drawers I want them in and where in each drawer—so she does this for pure spite instead of learning my preferences.)

 

I buy a huge spider at the dollar store. Maybe a bit too large, but at first glance, it appears REAL. Lifeless, of course, a rubbery plastic. Black, with touches of dark purples and blues. It will do the trick, as they say, quite nicely.

 

When I get home, I put the bag on the kitchen desk. Marie’s out. The girls are home, so we play a game of Monopoly. As usual, I have more money and properties than they do, and I’m gonna win another game.

 

Then, I hear Marie moseying in the kitchen. I didn’t hear her car pull into the driveway or the opening of the back door; neither did the girls hear anything.

 

I mutter, “Is that your mother?”

 

The game is immediately forgotten, and the little brats disappear into the kitchen.

 

The spider!

 

The bag!

 

I hightail it to the kitchen, where Marie’s bent over, hugging the girls. Doesn’t notice me. 

 

“Hey, Marie!” I say.

 

She looks up, surprised to see me. I live here, I want to shout, but I keep mum and nonchalantly move toward the desk. The bag: still there, exactly as I left it. Her purse is on the table and not on the desk where she usually puts it, which means she hasn’t noticed the bag or snooped into it. Thank goodness for small miracles!

 

I slip the bag behind my back and retreat to the bedroom. I withdraw the specimen, which kinda freaks me out when I see it again. I yank off the plastic clip and the cardboard. 

 

Now what?

 

I glance at the clock. Four thirty-five. Dinner won’t be ready by five tonight, that’s for sure. Unless she serves some crap out of a can. I chuckle. She deserves this!

 

I put the black monstrosity into my pocket and go into the den. The girls are back, putting away the game. Good little girls of mine though I didn’t have the chance to proclaim, “I beat you both again!” Probably that’s why they’re getting rid of the game.

 

I turn on the television. Usually, the TV is on in the kitchen while we eat though if Marie has her way, she’d trash it. She enjoys the other ones, especially the one in the bedroom, the one I’d like to trash.

 

Oh well…

 

“Dad! Dad!”

 

“What the hell!” I jump. “Wha—”

 

“Dinner. Time for dinner,” Sophie says. “I’ve been wakening you for forever. Thought you were dead. Like William.”

 

I rub my eyes. “Like William? No, I’m here. Still alive.” What the fu…

 

That daughter of mine—both of them, actually—likes to exaggerate. I’m sure my eyes were shut for three minutes tops. Unless Marie messed with the water she keeps in the fridge. Is she trying to eliminate me?

 

After dinner, the girls work on homework. Marie cleans up. I watch TV.

 

I must’ve snoozed for a bit. When I wake, Marie is reclining on the couch, reading.

 

I yawn. “I’m going to bed, Marie. You coming?”

 

“I just want to finish this book. Then I’ll be there.”

 

The girls are in bed, fast asleep. Perfect time for husbandly/wifely duties, right? Nope! Not where Marie’s concerned. Not with her and her dratted books. “Just gotta finish this chapter,” or “Just gotta finish this page,” or—you get the drift. 

 

When she finally decides to join me, in the privacy of our bedroom, on our nice plush queen-sized bed, with the friggin’ two-hundred-dollar comforter she just HAD to buy (that I forked out the bucks for!), a pressie will await her. Right smack dab in the middle of her pristine white plumped-up pillow.

 

I wait in bed, the too-thick comforter up to my chin, listening to Marie in the bathroom. Brushing her teeth. Washing her face…

 

Out of the corner of my eye, I sneak a peek. There it is! The black monstrosity.  Stark against the white. Ugly. Gross. If I were a woman, I’d be petrified. I’d screeched to Kingdom Come.

 

I close my eyes. She’s leaving the bathroom. Clumping toward the bed. Taking her sweet time to plod across the floor.

 

I hold my breath. I want to plug my ears against her soon-to-come screech. Should’ve inserted earplugs. Gotta keep still; don’t want her to know something’s amiss.

 

The bedclothes rustle and move.

 

I clench my fingers. Wait for the onslaught. For she’ll know it was me. But will know it was a “joke”—once she gets her breath back, of course. Once she realizes it’s fake.

 

I cringe. Here it comes…

 

The mattress sags. The covers move.

 

Something plops to my chest. I can feel it through the comforter. What the—

 

I keep still. Keep my eyes closed. Keep my fingers clenched.

 

What the hell…

 

Silence.

 

I open my eyes. Marie is in bed. Her back’s facing me. She’s a foot away, not trying to spoon into me. The covers are scrunched up around her neck.

 

I look down, toward my chest.

 

On the comforter. A black blob.

 

I scream. “What the f*** is that!”

 

I jump out of bed.

 

“Marie! Marie.”

 

The body in bed, under the comforter, is just that: a body. But it’s a live, breathing one. She’s faking it.

 

Marie always fakes it.

 

******

 

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The Spot Writers – ““Trying for a New Start” by Cathy MacKenzie

Welcome to The Spot Writers.

Catherine A. MacKenzie’s novels, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel or stand-alone novel (18+), are available on Amazon.

This month’s prompt is “starting over.” Cathy continues with her Melvin saga. . .

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“Trying for a New Start” by Cathy MacKenzie

I’m a few days late for resolutions this new year, but I’m determined to become a new man. Never too late to begin anew, right?  I’d shout, “Happy New Year, Marie,” but she wouldn’t hear me. She’s still in bed, asleep.

If at first you don’t succeed, try try try again. Clean slate and all that. “Don’t let the door kick your butt on the way out!”—that’s what I whispered on New Year’s Eve when I stood, freezing my buns off, at the front door from 11.58 p.m. to 12.02 a.m., waiting for the old year to escape outside and the new year to sneak in. Enough of Covid-19 and child loss. A clean slate, as I said.

I think Marie has wiped her slate clean, at least as it pertains to me. She started back to sleeping in our bedroom the night of January 1. Would’ve been nice had she joined me on the thirty-first instead of sleeping in the girls’ bedroom, where she’s been since they disappeared.

For far too long, she’s been harping about toilet paper in the downstairs bathroom. We passed on the stairs one day last week. “Look at this,” she said in her disgust tone, her arms full of half-used rolls. “Why can’t you finish one before you start another? I even found one in the tub. And why can’t you ever replace the empty on the toilet paper holder?”

I thought she was done, but nope!

“And look at this!”

“What?”

“On the stair here.”

“I don’t see anything.”

“Peanuts. You cart them downstairs in your hand instead of in a bowl and toss them into your mouth like you’re in a circus. Drop them everywhere. Just like the toilet paper!”

Yeah, I do need to mend my ways. Make her prouder of me.

Back to the girls. . . I don’t believe my two girls will ever bolt out of the water, gasping for breath, and return to us as William did. Almost every night, I’ve wished upon every star I’ve seen since that fateful night in August. Marie, too. I’m sure she’s done her fair share of wishing. Upon the stars and any other mirage-y thing high or low that she’s seen, for she’s always possessed a wild imagination.

She and I don’t talk about the girls. Neither does William. It’s as if aliens landed and wiped our minds clean. I know I’ve grieved—gone through those five stages of grief: denial, anger, bargaining, depression, acceptance. There’s actually a sixth stage: guilt. Not that I suffer guilt; well, I suppose I did, for a while. For the first couple of days. After all, the kids were in my care that day, but I do believe it was God’s will that they were taken. A test, if you will. To test our stamina.  See if we can survive every pitfall and pain the Good Lord Above tosses us.

And we can! We will!

I’m not sure if Marie and William have gone through those five stages of grief. I think not. I don’t think they suffer guilt: the sixth stage.

I need to have a heart-to-heart with William. I’m his father, after all, but I can’t. Not even sure I can give him the birds and bees chat when that time comes—which it will unless fate has a mishap for him, too, and then God takes him like He took his sweet sisters.

Everyone wants Covid over and done with. The populace hopes (those that “believe” pray to a god) this’ll be the year it’s gone, that we can all move on: onward ho! And once life’s deemed safe, that the pandemic is over, it’ll be like the entire world will be starting over. I envision people being nicer to each other. Everyone’s been holed up, imprisoned for far too long, and everyone’s afraid to socialize when we do venture out, so once we’re set free, I predict the world will have learned its lesson and it’ll be a calmer, quieter, more peaceful place of existence.

I, also, should start over. For me, for Marie. For William. I must forget the past. My indiscretions and guilt and sins. If I were Catholic, I’d race to a church. Seek out the priest. Sit behind that weird screen in that dark cubbyhole and confess confess confess until he lifts this mammoth boulder off my shoulders.

I may try to have those chats with William. Maybe the three of us can start talking about the girls as if they’re still alive and not dead. Maybe even pretend they’re in their beds at night and sleeping in every morning. Preteens need as much sleep as teenagers. I can bunch extra pillows, form little fake bodies in their beds. Call Marie into the room. Have her enjoy a few precious moments of happiness thinking they’re back. She lives in a dream world, anyhow, so what’s one more illusion, right?

Then, come April 1, I’ll shout: “Happy April Fool Day, Marie.”  I’ll grin. Bare my teeth—oh, I jest. Just my sarcastic humour! I’d never hurt her that way. Would I?

Yeah, the start of new beginnings. No more half-used or empty toilet paper rolls. No more peanuts on the stairs. I need to improve my ways.

It’s a new year—January 2022. Wish me luck. And good luck to you, too, in whatever fine resolutions you’re attempting!

I’ll start tomorrow. Tomorrow’s a new day.

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The Spot Writers – “Dimensional Storage” by Cathy MacKenzie

Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month, the prompt is: Someone has a superpower but only for one day a week.

Cathy’s novels, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel or stand-alone novel (18+), are available on Amazon. MY BROTHER, THE WOLF, the last of the series, is scheduled for release in 2023.

Cathy continues with her wacky, weird Melvin character.

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Dimensional Storage

Dimensional storage: Dimensional Storage (also called Hammerspace or Magic satchel) is the ability to store as many items as one wishes in a sort of “storage area” without any regard for running out of room. Users are then able to summon the desired item(s) at their whim, making it seem as if they pulled each object out of thin air (https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/).

The week after William returned home were frenzied, fluster-filled days. So many so-called well-wishers interrupted our days, what with unannounced appearances at the door, cards thunking to the foyer floor from the mail slot, telephone calls—not to mention countless tears from Marie. The frazzled me was uncertain whether they were tears of joy at our son’s return or tears of sadness that our two daughters were still gone. William’s return reminded me of the rising of Christ—except it wasn’t Easter; it was late August.

There weren’t many days until school started, which was the day after Labour Day. Marie wanted to keep William at home until mid-September (if not longer).

“He needs rest, Melvin,” she told me. “Rest. Lots of it. He’s had a horrendous ordeal.”

“It’s you, Marie. You’re causing it. He can’t get any rest, not with you hovering over him, pawing at him, sneaking into his room at all hours.”

Christ, what did she think? That William would disappear again and not return a second time? Granted, if it happened again—if he should disappear again—I have my doubts he’d reappear, so for once in her life, she was right. Christ, though! Why would he leave again?

She wouldn’t let him go down to the water. (To be honest, he had no desire to go.) Wimpy kid. Wimpy William—how apropos! But that suited me just fine. I liked my space. Didn’t want to chance killing him again—accidentally, of course—so perhaps it was best he stay away.

So… I let Marie call the shots. Decide what our son could and couldn’t do, school or not. One of these days he’d have enough and rebel. Not at me, though. His rebellion would be on Marie.

I never told Marie or anyone else the whole story. That it was me—me!—who brought him home in the end. Figured no one would believe me.

But it was me! I brought him home…

The morning of the day of William’s return, I’d awoken early. It was 3:23. I held my breath sliding out of bed, not wanting the rickety bedframe to squeak and wake Marie. I sauntered into the living room. The newspaper lay on the end table. Bored, I picked it up and flipped through it. (I don’t often read the paper; Marie’s the news freak.)

Anyhow, an article titled “Dimensional Storage” caught my eye.

After digesting the words (both freaky and interesting), I envisioned my brain as a storage area, a room full of items. Many items. Mostly thoughts, such as dreams, wishes, wants, regrets, past loves. I stuck my kids in there, too. Saw their sweet faces. They were alive. Playing Monopoly. I filled my mind as full as I could (not really consciously aware of what I was doing) as if my head were as vacuous as the Goodyear Blimp. I pursued my past. Inserted some scenes into the space. My deceased parents (God rest their souls!), too. So full was my mind! Despite that, I knew room existed for more: happy thoughts, horrid thoughts. I kept filling my mind. Stuffed everything I had into that imaginary storage room.

I rehashed the pertinent words from the article: store as many items as one wishes in a sort of “storage area” without any regard for running out of room.

I’d done that. My mind was full.

I re-read the most important words: Users are then able to summon the desired item(s) at their whim, making it seem as if they pulled each object out of thin air.

I closed my eyes. Pictured my kids. Plucked each one from death.

As we all now know, I succeeded—well, partly. One returned; two didn’t. One out of three; not a great result but better than nothing, I suppose.

Barely hours after I’d read the article and transformed my mind into a storage area, William returned. It was as if I’d morphed into a magician and pulled him out of that deep black hat. As if I’d pulled him out of thin air.

I tried many other times after that to retrieve my daughters in a similar fashion. Alas, no such luck, so I finally gave up. It was as if I possessed magical powers—but only for that one day.

But you know what?

I haven’t given up hope. Perhaps my daughters washed up on another shore. Perhaps one of them is “Peggy of the Cove” and will live on for eternity. Perhaps Peggy has a twin! Or what if both are together, have amnesia, and can’t find their way home? Perhaps they’ll be found one day, or maybe before then, I’ll have another day with magical powers.

Perhaps Marie will have her daughters back before she reaches Heaven (or Hell). Who knows, right?

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